Winter's Twelfth Night

Hello daydreamer! Well, this was truly outstanding. It had a wonderful flow and I noticed very few grammar mistakes. I guess you could say that grammar is my "specialty" when ...

Hello! Once again, I like the way this story is going. The plot is interesting. Here are my critiques: “HOW goes it, Marie!” The exclamation point should be a question ...

Hello Jok101! I am Winter and I shall review your script. Well... There's really nothing for me to review. Not because it's perfect, because it's so short. The only dialogue ...

Hello Kylan! I am Winter's Twelfth Night (or just Winter) and I shall review your story today! Well, I must say that this was intense! Is this based on a ...

Hello Ballerina13. I really enjoyed reading this! I am a dancer myself and it helped that I could relate to the story. I think that the other reviewers caught most ...

Hello BeckFletch! I am Winter's Twelfth Night (or just Winter) and I shall review your story today! First of all, excellent job! There were very few mistakes in grammar and ...

Interesting. I didn't see any mistakes in grammar and punctuation. You could definitely use some description here. The lack of it makes this almost boring. Almost. Also, it took me ...

*Edited Jan. 24 4:23pm* Hello Rascalover! I am Winter's Twelfth Night (or just Winter) and I shall review your story for you today! Overall I thought this story was quite ...

Hello Kakali! I am Winter's Twelfth Night (or just Winter) and I will be your reviewer today! This was an excellent piece. Well done! It was very interesting and held ...

This prologue was extremely short. There was very little detail. There was very little information at all. Where are the characters? When does this happen? Who are they? How old ...

I'm trying really, really hard to ignore the grammar. Really hard. Anyway, I thought this was interesting but it should probably be in a blog, not in the non-fiction forum. ...

This was excellent! I think the other reviewers caught most of the mistakes, but I have a few questions. Actually, I think the other reviewers may have asked these questions ...

Well, this is certainly an interesting story. When does this take place? Parts of it sound old fashioned, like Victorian England. Other parts sound quite modern. Also, you need to ...

This is an interesting story. I think that it would be very good if you just fixed a couple of things. You might want to add some extra detail as ...

Hahahahaha!! That was the funniest script I have ever read! Why didn't you just kill Bella? All of the series' problems would be solved if Bella were dead. But even ...